This week's prompt at The Sunday Creative was orient.
You are driving on ice
When it occurs to you
You are losing control,
Your car is spinning,
And your life flashes before your eyes
As if you were watching a silent picture
Playing in slow motion.
You transcend to another place
Found only in your mind
Just before it slowly begins to spin.
Your car takes flight
And glides effortlessly across the ice
As when a hundred starlings lift
And bank together
Before they wheel and drop.
Very much like the moment
The rivers seem
To still and stop
Because a storm is coming.
Like the moment just before
A tornado takes hold of your life
And twists everything around
Rearranging the landscapes.
The picture plays in slow motion.
But there is no storm.
As life speeds back up
To an extra fast pace
You can regain control
And put the landscape back in its proper location
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I hope this fits the bill. I enjoyed your contribution. After a scare one's life settles back to normal, but the body takes a while.
So well written..shook me up!
LOVE this take on the prompt! Beautiful.
wow. very powerful.
love this poem… the visual imagery is wonderful!
just parousing the blogsphere tonight… not quite sure how i landed here, but i think it had something to do with that adorable girl with all the tatoos…
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